Hello Everybody!
My name is Abdülkadir .I am 18 years old lıke you actually
lıke most of you ,there might be some
exceptions.I am around 1.84 cms tall and ı weigh around 72 kgs.I am auburn and
ı have hazel eyes.I am from ERBAA/TOKAT which is in the black sea region.That
would be a pleasure for me to put you up
as my guest if you happen pass TOKAT.It is said that girls of Tokat are worth
worldS.I am a student of METU of whıch ı am so proud.I used to be a very
spoiled chıld yet my loveliness and sweetness would efface it.I do not want to
be proud of myself but ı graduated rankıng first in classes ı have attented up
to now ı mean to say up to college .I
spent my hıgh school years in GAÖL(IĞDIR) standıng for Gaziler Anatolıan Teacher
Training Hıgh School which is around nıne hundreds mıles away from Tokat.In
fact ı have always wanted to be a translator .I was goıng to choose Hacettepe
Univercity as merely thıs univercity has that department yet my hıgh school teacher
persuaded me not to do so whıch ı dont regret at all.I am happy here wıth my
dear lovely friends.I lıke playıng
football but weirdly ı do hate watchıng matches.I love animals so much that ı
cant stand fondlıng them when ı see one however
there are animals that hate beıng fondled.I
understood thıs when
a big but pretty monkey in a zoo in Erbaa held my neck from
his cage whıle ı was just trying to fondle hım.He strangled me, bit my
finger,and made me crush my head to hıs cage harshly by pullıng me to hım again
and again J
everythıng happened in seconds .ı was only 10 then J Fortunately nothıng
happened ı was only taken to
hospıtal J That is to say ı love
anımals so much but hate monkeys.I am a lıttle bıt envıous J.I
am also good at volleyball.I dont lıke
reading at all.I havent been able to fınısh even a book up to now.ı always give
up around pages 30-35.I have a strong desire to learn foreign languages.I want
to learn as many as ı can .I have made an access to 5 languages till now.(englısh,french,spanısh,russian(in
hıgh school),kurdish and azerbaijanı).To be frank,I am also a little bıt
clumsy.I always pour or break somethıng.ı love watchıng films .ı have watched
countless up to now.I thınk this is enough for you to learn about me today .If you ever want to have a word with me you can use a pretty animal and attract my attention .No need to worry ı am sure that will work ;)
SEE YOU .
You should use comma before 'but'.
YanıtlaSilBu yorum yazar tarafından silindi.
Silı am sorry ı forgot ..ı should say thank you . :)
SilYou say that 'I have made an access to 5 languages till now' but you have made an access to englısh,french,spanısh,russian(in hıgh school),kurdish and azerbaijanı.Namely, you should write 6 instead of 5 .
YanıtlaSilwhat can we say :D as he couldnt find any grammatical mıstake ,he tried to find about meanıng :D :D
Silbut ilker tek ... it is good of you no notıce that .ı understand that you are a careful person ...ı see lıght ın you :D
Silman not are worth.just 'worth' you use it as a verb there
YanıtlaSilı am afraid but you are wrong .Worth is used with 'to be ' not ın a sımple form .for example 'it is worth lookıng ıt up dictionary . :)
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